Some strenglog was your paragraphs in your blog they were long. They also had lots of detail in them.
I liked the pictures you chose. I also liked your use of voice. <3
Before you start digshing out details, you grabb the readers attention by asking them a question.
I like how you added alot of detail :))
Some strenglog was your paragraphs in your blog they were long. They also had lots of detail in them.
ReplyDeleteI liked the pictures you chose. I also liked your use of voice. <3
ReplyDeleteBefore you start digshing out details, you grabb the readers attention by asking them a question.
ReplyDeleteI like how you added alot of detail :))
ReplyDelete